samurai waits
gazes westward
sighs longingly
Story in Six Words: 夜明け
26 Jul 2013 11 Comments
in Haiku, Musings Tags: dawn, lonely, longing, love, Samurai
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Jul 26, 2013 @ 22:05:46
Impressive for six words! 🙂
Jul 27, 2013 @ 09:43:05
Thank you
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Jul 27, 2013 @ 13:04:59
Not really. You see, I know that samurai very well…
Jul 26, 2013 @ 22:09:22
Great job!
Jul 27, 2013 @ 09:43:27
Thank you very much
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Jul 27, 2013 @ 11:57:17
Reblogged this on Kultural Yakuza.
Jul 27, 2013 @ 13:04:23
Thank you very much for the reblog! I’m honored.
Jul 30, 2013 @ 00:12:45
I should try this, great story.
Jul 30, 2013 @ 07:02:58
It is good discipline and opens a new way of looking at things. I’m going to start doing it on a regular basis.
> Date: Tue, 30 Jul 2013 04:12:48 +0000
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Aug 02, 2013 @ 08:43:49
The economy of words and the images they create is just outstanding.
A woodprint/block picture cast in perfect words.
Aug 02, 2013 @ 12:05:20
I thank you for your amazing words. I write haiku because it causes me to think with more clarity and economy. I know modern haiku will all less than the proscribed syllables, but I am finding a great affection for “six words”. Hokusai comes to mind with your woodprint/block comment. I find it is also good discipline and focuses my thoughts better. I did not need the gif, but I just liked it so very much! I love snow at night. Although it is summer and has not yet snowed, it snowed in my dreams and therefore is my “first snow”. Thank you again.