許し

And finally, we
are like clouds.Separate then
joined. We touch and part.

Until we become
as one again.

Forgiveness like blue
sky flows.

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Clowie
    Oct 19, 2013 @ 07:58:06

    That’s really beautiful.

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    • kanzensakura
      Oct 19, 2013 @ 09:57:30

      Thank you! As well as you write, I’ll bet you would be a wonderful poet.

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      • Clowie
        Oct 20, 2013 @ 06:00:58

        Thank you for your kind words about my writing, but I’m no poet.

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        • kanzensakura
          Oct 20, 2013 @ 15:39:06

          Well Clowie, it’s like this, and I think your bipeds would agree. some of us cannot write sonnets or poems that rhyme or haiku. But, sometimes, we come close to it – accidentally. Your perspective on things, how you describe things – often times come close to – not being a “full poem”, are often short poems. talking about seeing the world upside down, when you looked down on the clouds instead of looking up at them was very poetic We feel things deeply inside and when we share it with others, we write what I call “accidental poetry”. So – you are a poet and maybe don’t know it! 🙂

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          • Clowie
            Oct 20, 2013 @ 16:24:03

            I like your notion of “accidental poetry”. I hadn’t thought about describing the world as upside down being poetic. I have noticed certain phrases in prose I like having something special sometimes. I’ve thought of the phrases as being almost melodic, but I think we’re describing the same feeling.

            Reply

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