落ち葉

Sodden ochiba
Lay listless in cold rain. No
Longer bright banners.

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. SirenaTales
    Nov 27, 2013 @ 09:27:09

    Beautiful…such vivid word choices: sodden, listless, banners. Thank you.

    Reply

  2. kanzensakura
    Nov 27, 2013 @ 10:27:28

    Thank you so much. I do appreciate your kind words

    Reply

  3. dragonlife
    Nov 27, 2013 @ 18:12:51

    Sad and beautiful!

    Reply

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