Sodden ochiba
Lay listless in cold rain. No
Longer bright banners.
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27 Nov 2013 4 Comments
in Musings Tags: autumn, cold rain, haiku, Japanese style poetry, melancholy, ochiba
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Nov 27, 2013 @ 09:27:09
Beautiful…such vivid word choices: sodden, listless, banners. Thank you.
Nov 27, 2013 @ 10:27:28
Thank you so much. I do appreciate your kind words
Nov 27, 2013 @ 18:12:51
Sad and beautiful!
Nov 28, 2013 @ 10:21:47
Thank you. In the rain, the faded fallen leaves did seem very sad to me.
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