I.
winter day: silent
birds pecking seeds beneath bare
forsythia bush.
II.
Oddly warm winter
day. sepia drizzle tints
silent yard and sky.
04 Jan 2015 8 Comments
in General Poetry, Haiku Tags: birds, blogging, Daily Post, drizzle, haiku, Japanese style poetry, peace, poetry, winter
I.
winter day: silent
birds pecking seeds beneath bare
forsythia bush.
II.
Oddly warm winter
day. sepia drizzle tints
silent yard and sky.
bkpyett
Jan 04, 2015 @ 18:29:19
Beautiful in its simplicity! ❤
nikibayard
Jan 04, 2015 @ 19:32:55
how beautiful you are, thank you for this
x
kanzensakura
Jan 04, 2015 @ 21:37:55
Thank you for such a kind comment.
Let's CUT the Crap!
Jan 05, 2015 @ 08:50:55
F.a.b.u.l.o.u.s. I especially love the alliteration in the second line of number one. The simplicity, I too agree, makes both these shine. ❤ ❤
kanzensakura
Jan 05, 2015 @ 11:15:47
Thank you. Tbese wrote tbemselves without any help from me. You are always so kind to me.. ♡♡♡
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Let's CUT the Crap!
Jan 05, 2015 @ 14:53:52
I call ’em like I sees ’em. Easy Peasy, Kanzen.
❤ ❤
Amber Danette
Jan 07, 2015 @ 20:37:40
Beautiful 😉
kanzensakura
Jan 07, 2015 @ 20:38:30
Thank you 🙂
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