Monday, January 11, I will be privileged to host the first Haibun Monday of 2016 at dVerse Poets Pub. I am using a photo I took a couple of years ago as the prompt for the haibun. I hope you all will come visit and read some of the documents that will be posted. The prompt is open for a week so if you are inspired, you will have plenty of time to submit your haibun. Haibun is an ancient Japanese poetic form attributed to Matsuo Basho, when he kept a travelogue of his observations interspersed with haiku among the prose. A unique and interesting poetic form to be sure. There are many “how to’s” on the internet. Some find it a very relatable form of poetry because of the prose that accompanies the haiku. It is often a personal and intimate form. I hope you will come and visit. I will be updating this post with the link when it posts on the dVerse site Monday. Yuki no hana is Japanese for snow flowers – a quality of snowflake or flowers that bloom out of season in the snow. The photo is of my generations old flowering quince – blooming early in winter instead of spring.

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The day was ice. Bare tree branches against the iron sky were a frieze of unreadable runes. Only the distant sweet call of a cardinal broke the almost silent hissing sound of the falling snow. I stood and watched the snow fall, listening – like a single stone in an ancient Zen garden. Snow – white. Tree trunks, branches – dead black. All around – black against white – a sharply contrasted photograph of a deep winter landscape – except for a small bit of rosy pink. A single explanation point in the ancient tangled branches of the flowering quince. I could not resist. The stone moved to gently touch the blossoms, to press loving lips against brave petals in the storm.
snow flowers blossom
out of season – unmindful
of pitiless storm.
Jan 10, 2016 @ 01:47:31
Reamarkable!
Jan 10, 2016 @ 06:56:12
So amazing!
Jan 10, 2016 @ 09:07:41
Wonderful image. Beautiful writing.
Jan 10, 2016 @ 15:08:23
Thank you. Your words mean a lot.
Jan 10, 2016 @ 09:27:14
Sometimes just a little bit of color in one’s life can brighten one’s day! Especially when it takes a person by surprise!
Jan 10, 2016 @ 09:41:39
Exactly! An aha moment.
Jan 10, 2016 @ 13:05:25
Gorgeous!
Jan 10, 2016 @ 15:07:00
Thank you. I hope with all the awful weather, you and yours and the furbabies are safe and sound.
Jan 10, 2016 @ 14:36:45
You brought me right there, I saw and experienced it with you. Just so beautiful, Toni. Contrast is definitely a theme of this photo.
Jan 10, 2016 @ 15:50:08
Contrast definitely is. I’ve thought of making this photo black and white as I did another photo of tangled branches and snow. But then, I can’t bear to gray that pink bloom. We need contrast and we need that color.
Jan 10, 2016 @ 18:41:45
Black against white….I also love the blossoming haiku despite the pitiless storm ~
Beautiful haibun Toni ~ Have a good week ~
Jan 10, 2016 @ 18:47:08
Thank you Grace. A good week to you as well.
Jan 10, 2016 @ 23:43:19
I don’t know how to link poems linked to my poem – I’m not always talented that way. The prompt and more about it will post on dVerse Poets Pub tomorrow at 3pm EST. I hope you will visit and read my prompt post – I think you will like it and especially as there is a photo attached to the prompt. I so enjoyed this and was just intrigued by the title. I will be updating my post tomorrow with the the link to dVerse and also, you can google dVerse Poets Pub and pull up the site. After 3, the current posting should show up on google or you can visit this post again and grab the link to visit. I hope you will visit! Thank you so much for responding to this prompt. Japanese poetic forms are dear to me.
Jan 10, 2016 @ 23:08:40
This is beautiful. I was swept up in the poetic imagery. I have written a haibun in response to the prompt but don’t where to link it. I linked it to this post. I hope that is ok. Please let me know if I should link somewhere else. http://artifactsandfictions.com/2016/01/11/snow-on-the-heartbreak-hills/
Jan 10, 2016 @ 23:37:30
I usually give the link but the prompt hasn’t posted yet. it will post tomorrow at 3pm EST at dVerse Poets pub. I hope you will visit there and link this so others can read. I will be updating this tomorrow with the line to dVerse. Thank you and thank you for responding to the prompt.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 03:01:08
Oh I am sorry. That’s the problem with writing from Australia. It’s already the 11th here and almost sunset now! I’ll check back in tomorrow and find the correct place to link. Thanks for your reply.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 11:34:16
I am glad. Us folk in this hemisphere and on this side of the prime meridian get terribly confused about time differences. 🙂
Jan 11, 2016 @ 15:27:02
Me too – obviusly!
Jan 11, 2016 @ 15:33:01
I have sent you the link but just in case: http://dversepoets.com/2016/01/11/haibun-monday-5/ We usually have discussions and such so please join us. It is quiet now but will pick up a little later. Let us know you are new to the site so we can welcome you.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 17:49:40
Thank you very much. I have done as you suggested.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 05:38:15
How beautiful… that moment, the fleeting pink.. to me so much more than just a flower in a snow. It could be a moment, a kind word… you took me right there.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 11:30:01
Exactly. And today, I see that spot of pink as David Bowie, a bright spot of color in a world of black and white.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 16:09:01
Beautiful, as always. Peace, Linda
Jan 11, 2016 @ 16:11:21
Thank you!
Jan 11, 2016 @ 17:53:15
Beautiful and instructive. You captured the essence here and gave me an outline for trying mine. Thanks so much. Sorry I haven’t been around much. I’ll try harder.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 18:43:24
It is good to see you. You have definitely been missed. We all have these times when we must step back and you can be sure we understand.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 18:03:12
Beautiful.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 19:55:03
Gorgeous haibun & lovely haiku that put me in the perfect place mentally & emotionally to write my own. Sorry about being inadvertently confused early on.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 20:09:47
Glenn honey, I have reached the point that between taking care of my husband and worry over my mother, I have become a permanent resident in the state of Confusion. Poetry and study are my places of rest. No problem.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 20:09:53
Your photo illustrates very well the black and white contrast and then that striking pink flower…such beauty. I love your gentle reverence in this to the flower’s resilience and to David Bowie’s passing. May he rest in peace. Thanks again, Toni, for sharing your knowledge with a lovely presentation today.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 21:29:11
Thank you Gayle. It’s been a rough day and your words are so soothing to my heart. Thank you.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 23:24:19
Sorry for your rough day, Toni, and glad my words could soothe you.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 23:46:07
I was pretty low, feeling inadequate and stupid, missing my mom, missing a dear friend who died a little bit ago…truly low day. Your words most def helped.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 23:50:29
Oh, so very sorry. I think winters do make these feelings worse don’t they. I’m honored that my words helped you…truly.
Jan 12, 2016 @ 00:39:24
Thank you.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 22:03:07
I love that image of a silent stone standing forever upright in a Zen garden. Powerful, and evocative.
Jan 11, 2016 @ 22:15:37
Thank you. Ryoan-ji is my heart home and it seems to come out at times.
Jan 12, 2016 @ 02:14:55
A spot of colour and comfort (and bravery) in a desolate winter world. Very windy and stormy and wet here today, just what I needed.
Jan 12, 2016 @ 02:21:45
Evokes the wonder of nature perfectly, in the true tradition of Japanese poetry.
Jan 12, 2016 @ 11:01:10
I’m in love with your second sentence. The haiku is perfection. I am going to have to study this form more. So beautiful.
Jan 12, 2016 @ 21:25:23
This is just breathtaking:
“Bare tree branches against the iron sky were a frieze of unreadable runes.”
Jan 12, 2016 @ 21:31:17
Thank you. I worked hard on that.
Jan 12, 2016 @ 23:15:45
Perfect….lingering!
Jan 17, 2016 @ 23:06:07
very beautiful 🙂
Jan 19, 2016 @ 07:44:33
I love the musicality of your prose in this piece!