Quadrille Monday (second submission)

I am hosting the Quadrille prompt for today at dVerse.  A poem of exactly 44 words, not counting the title using the word “skip”.  Come join us!  Short poems won’t take long to read.  Have some fun and don’t skip this opportunity for fun.  This is my second submission for this prompt.   https://dversepoets.com/2016/05/02/quadrille-8/

Perfect Stone
Stevie Stevenson – cutest guy in first grade.
Class trip, picnic by the pond.
He skipped stones across the pond.
He picked up the perfect stone for me.
Snuck into my pocket, kept it.
Looking at it made my heart
Skip a beat all summer.

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18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. whimsygizmo
    May 02, 2016 @ 15:30:17

    YES. Love this. Those remnants of first love are just so tangible.

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    May 02, 2016 @ 15:53:16

    I do love this.. what a wonderful memory to have such a treasure in possession…

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  3. Linda Kruschke
    May 02, 2016 @ 16:43:27

    What a sweet memory.

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  4. kanzensakura
    May 02, 2016 @ 16:54:06

    Yes it is. Such a happy and innocent time.

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  5. Patti
    May 02, 2016 @ 18:27:48

    Aw, this is so sweet. Love it.

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  6. ihatepoetry
    May 02, 2016 @ 18:37:02

    Wonderful!

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  7. Grace
    May 02, 2016 @ 20:11:08

    How sweet….I love your story ~

    Reply

  8. Bodhirose
    May 02, 2016 @ 20:27:49

    Even in first grade it meant something to have a cute boy pay attention to you…so sweet.

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  9. lillian
    May 02, 2016 @ 20:59:42

    oh smiling I am! That first boyfriend….and the innocence of watching him skip stones….and then the stone in the pocket making your heart skip a beat. LOVE it! 🙂 The innocence of puppy love 🙂 That was the terminology in my day.

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  10. lynn__
    May 02, 2016 @ 21:58:01

    Love the sweet, innocent ways you used to “skip” the theme…good prompt, Toni!

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  11. Candy
    May 02, 2016 @ 23:18:43

    sweet puppy love

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  12. kim881
    May 03, 2016 @ 05:27:24

    Great to see you inspired by your own challenge! Such a cute memory and so beautifully conveyed.

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  13. Victoria C. Slotto
    May 05, 2016 @ 14:57:02

    Wonderful, simple young love. Ahhh.

    Reply

  14. Rosemary Nissen-Wade
    May 08, 2016 @ 08:04:28

    Oh, what a lovely reminiscence!

    Reply

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