Open link night at dVerse tonight. You can submit any one poem of your choice. Come join us. Bjorn is tending the pub all the way over in Sweden! He has a special guest today – Sean Michael – a prisoner in the California penal system who frequently posts on dVerse. Open Link Night #178 – Saving Grace
The Necklace
After you left I kept thinking you would return.
And because you so loved the small beauties
and the simple things, I kept the memories.
I wanted to embed them in molten glass
and string them on a fine gold chain
that you could wear under your clothes
close to your heart,
to pull the chain up and look at those simple things
and see them through my eyes that saw them without you:
the way the mist lay close to the ground
in the late autumn,
or the sound of birds the morning of the first snow.
The tiny new kittens boneless and blind
opening their pink mouths and silently hissing.
The last string of geese flying south
in the apricot dawn,
the velvet eyes of the young heifer in my friend’s barn
and the warm smell of the animals and hay,
the first tiny pink cherry blossom opening slowly
in the cold of early spring
or the ever spreading ripples in the koi pond
made by slow rain.
you never returned.
and the necklace of memories sleeps
in a small wooden box
never touched by your hand or seen by your eyes.
The Necklace
25 Aug 2016 46 Comments
in General Poetry Tags: free verse poem, longing, loss, memories
Aug 25, 2016 @ 14:39:35
I love this string of memories…very much like a necklace, but oh that ache of being hidden away in a box. Beautiful write!
Aug 25, 2016 @ 20:59:02
Thank you very much Bryan.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 15:19:21
The image of the necklace as memories is so touching… though it felt a bit sad that it’s put inside a box and not worn.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 15:28:00
Such a wonderful and poignant string of memories here.. ❤️ Your talent and flair for imagery never ceases to amaze me ❤️ Sigh.. I adore this part:
the first tiny pink cherry blossom opening slowly
in the cold of early spring or the ever spreading ripples in
the koi pond made by slow rain.
Beautifully executed.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Aug 25, 2016 @ 20:58:07
Thank you Sanaa for your so very kind words. Hugs.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 15:42:14
A lovely collection of musings and emotions 🙂
Aug 26, 2016 @ 11:29:21
Thank you!
Aug 25, 2016 @ 15:45:05
Beautiful imagery here, Toni, all strung in a beautiful necklace of a poem. I especially love the lines:
‘the way the mist lay close to the ground
in the late autumn,
or the sound of birds the morning of the first snow’
and
‘The last string of geese flying south
in the apricot dawn.
Such a peaceful poem, with a tinge of sadness.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 20:57:35
Thank you. And it held deep sadness, from years past.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 16:33:00
This is STUNNING. I want to read this a dozen times tonight.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 16:44:58
Thank you, thank you Shawna. I am so very glad you enjoyed this. Thank you.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 16:57:08
I liked the apricot dawn.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 18:51:52
This is a strong & personal write–pure creative poetry–a necklace of memories, indeed. You bent us to your will as you bathed us in this stunning, yet tranquil, creativity. I liked the line /the overspreading ripples in the koi pond/made by slow rain/.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 20:56:10
Thank you Glenn. It was written for the Japanese lover who left so long ago. I finally got this write out of my system.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 20:13:29
I love the details of the necklace of memories Toni!
Aug 25, 2016 @ 21:47:38
Loved this idea of memories being linked together as a necklace. So many lines captured my imagination in this poem. Two of my favorites:
“…I kept the memories./I wanted to embed them in molten glass/and string them on a fine gold chain/that you could wear under your clothes/close to your heart”
“and the necklace of memories sleeps/in a small wooden box/never touched by your hand or seen by your eyes.”
Aug 26, 2016 @ 11:28:51
Thank you so much for these words.
Aug 25, 2016 @ 23:27:37
So exquisitely rich and sad.
Aug 26, 2016 @ 06:13:22
Beautiful, beautiful….and sad. You had me at ‘boneless kittens hissing’.
Memories not claimed…..sigh.
Aug 26, 2016 @ 11:28:23
Yes. My Japanese lover of 13 years who returned to Japan. But…we move on! I finally wrote this one out of my system.
Aug 26, 2016 @ 12:44:49
my married name was Mori. I should have married the father, a better man than the son. Glad you moved on. That is the basis for survival.
Aug 26, 2016 @ 06:17:22
a necklace of memories — and such beautiful imagery. This is stunning. It’s true, isn’t it? Most of us have memories tucked away — in a small box, in the leaves of a book, in our heart. Beautiful written, as always. A lovely way to begin my day, reading your words here. Tipping my first morning cup to you, my friend!
Aug 26, 2016 @ 11:27:30
Thank you Lillian. It is always a pleasure to know you will be reading along with your morning cup o’Joe! Truly, thank you.
Aug 26, 2016 @ 06:55:59
Beautiful and poignant string of memories .
Aug 26, 2016 @ 11:26:23
Thank you.
Aug 26, 2016 @ 07:23:35
I love stringing thoughts and memories together like this, and you’ve done it so well, Toni.
Aug 26, 2016 @ 11:26:04
Thank you!
Aug 26, 2016 @ 09:28:27
This is so complete — not a word misused or out of place — that I can’t even pick a favorite phrase. This is exceptional poetry.
Aug 26, 2016 @ 11:24:58
Thank you Shawna so very much. I am glad to see you again.
Aug 26, 2016 @ 13:19:39
and the necklace of memories sleeps
in a small wooden box
never touched by your hand
One feels for the warmth of companionship which is missing for some reasons but still hoped for. Like this ending as there is no finality but there is hope hope which is good ending!
Hank
Aug 26, 2016 @ 15:13:01
Actually. not a good ending ar all/ He never came for the memories, never touched by his hand. Sorry! 😦
Aug 27, 2016 @ 09:59:55
Absolutely loved this…such a flowing beautiful poem…
Aug 27, 2016 @ 20:46:30
I feel the sadness and the regret (if it be the right word). I can hear the quiet voice speaking, see the beauty she sees, the hope that she nurtured, and the disappointment. Well done.
Aug 27, 2016 @ 20:55:50
Thank you very much.
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Aug 28, 2016 @ 00:15:28
Such quiet melancholy and hope and then ultimately melancholy again strung together… this is exquisite and sad.
Aug 28, 2016 @ 22:41:06
Thank you.
Aug 28, 2016 @ 02:40:38
This is absolutely wonderful. Such melancholy and such imagery… the lines
‘I wanted to embed them in molten glass
and string them on a fine gold chain
that you could wear under your clothes
close to your heart’
are so beautiful. I’m not generally effusive in my comments, but in this case it’s because I can’t find the words.
Aug 28, 2016 @ 22:40:50
Thank you for your kind comments. Thank you.
Sep 13, 2016 @ 17:08:06
This is a nice poem. Memories are always a good for providing subject matter. I wrote one once called “Memories in a Box.”
Sep 13, 2016 @ 17:13:00
These kind of poems are always a little bit sad, aren’t they? Nice that you wrote one similar.
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Oct 30, 2016 @ 07:53:08
Reblogged this on From 1 Blogger 2 Another.
Nov 01, 2016 @ 12:48:31
Thank you for re-blogging!
Nov 01, 2016 @ 16:13:30
You’re welcome. Haven’t bumped into you in a million years! Hope you are well?
Nov 01, 2016 @ 16:28:02
I am very well. Got stuff going on but am working through it. Hope you are well!
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Nov 01, 2016 @ 17:26:47
Glad to hear you are weathering it all. 🙂 Namaste! That and a big hug. 🙂
Nov 01, 2016 @ 19:56:15
Blessings and a big hug to you as well