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the super moon brought
fall to our part of the South –
bright days frosty nights
bright days frosty nights
full moon lights the nights with white
light and gray shadows
light and gray shadows –
the moon shines bright as day – gray
instead of silver
instead of silver –
pewter light turns the world
to black and white –
daguerreotype
public domain NASA photo
kanzen sakura 
Nov 17, 2016 @ 15:35:37
I love how you go from colors into sepia here… sometimes it’s an aspect of moon that we forgot… a daguerreotype… what a perfect image.
Nov 17, 2016 @ 15:37:04
Thank you Bjorn
Nov 17, 2016 @ 15:47:27
I’m with Bjorn. I love the different shades of grey. (perhaps a better 50 shades of gray? LOL) Caught the moon early last night, though it wasn’t full, it was orange at the horizon. I love how each stanza streams into the next.
Nov 17, 2016 @ 15:58:03
I love this, especially ‘bright days frosty nights – full moon lights the nights with white – light and gray shadows’
Nov 17, 2016 @ 17:44:06
I admire the inter-connected verses specially the last one ~ I took some shots of the supermoon the last few nights as it was a gorgeous sight ~ Lovely share Toni ~
Nov 17, 2016 @ 19:21:01
pewter light turns the world
to black and white –
daguerreotype
…love that!
Nov 17, 2016 @ 20:31:03
Beautiful, Toni…love how the moon’s colors change perhaps with her waning and waxing.
Nov 17, 2016 @ 22:34:16
Love the progression of the poem. And the wonderful image you leave us with.
Nov 17, 2016 @ 22:47:49
Each of these works alone and they all work together. Nice job!
Nov 18, 2016 @ 13:38:59
Thank you…the beauty of linked haiku.
Nov 17, 2016 @ 23:48:20
I find it fascinating how the moon does change color all in one night!
Nov 17, 2016 @ 23:50:10
love how each stanza’s end provides the beginning of the next.
Nov 18, 2016 @ 08:01:17
If no one wrote about the moon did it actually rise in pale colors to our eyes? I really like the transitions you created here.
Nov 18, 2016 @ 13:34:41
Thank you.
Nov 18, 2016 @ 10:21:02
I really like the ending and this line: “full moon lights the nights with white”
Nov 18, 2016 @ 13:34:10
Thank you.
Nov 18, 2016 @ 11:43:23
Beautiful painting of words in lovely colors of calm
Nov 18, 2016 @ 13:33:48
Thank you.
Nov 18, 2016 @ 15:17:55
I was not lucky enough to view the super moon as the skies were overcast here. So I thank you for providing me with wonderful poetic imagery of the event.
Kind regards
Anna :o]
Nov 18, 2016 @ 19:47:00
instead of silver –
pewter light turns the world
to black and white –
There is the easy flow along the way all connected. Yes the moon may turn out to drab and gray!
Hank
Nov 20, 2016 @ 19:33:02
Yes ineed it may. Thank you Hank.
Nov 18, 2016 @ 22:49:44
What a lovely poem, I never got really see the supermoon due to cloud cover…I saw it peekaboo that’s all…you’ve penned a poem of beauty. Well done!
Nov 20, 2016 @ 19:32:16
Thank you. We had some peekaboo moments ourselves!
Nov 19, 2016 @ 12:43:04
lovely linked haikus. I join the others in commenting on the excellent way you wrote about the changing moon. 🙂
Nov 20, 2016 @ 19:30:42
Thank you…again!
Nov 19, 2016 @ 14:44:35
The language of colour is never more eloquent than in our material world.
Nov 21, 2016 @ 17:47:12
I, too, loved the shades of gray and the crisp imagery. Lovely!