Shade

For dVerse Poetics. Today Lillian is hosting the prompt. Our poem can contain derivatives of the word “shade” but must include the word “shade”. http://dversepoets.com/2017/08/08/seeking-some-shade-today/

Hot summer day –
The shade lies resting on the lawn
tossing and turning
in the heat generated breeze,
growing shorter all the while
until dusk
when it calls it a day and joins
the darkness on the grass
and finally goes to sleep –
stretching out in the dew bedecked grass
ready to get up and start a new day
at dawn

27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. lillian
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 15:07:09

    LOVE this idea of shade, tossing and turning, changing its shape, receding into dusk only to rise again the next summer day. Beautifully penned as always, Toni! 🙂

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  2. Grace
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 15:08:02

    I am that person hiding under the shade, from the summer heat Toni ~ Love that dew bedecked grass ~

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  3. Jane Dougherty
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 15:12:56

    Shade is the leftovers of the night. Lovely verse.

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  4. Victoria C. Slotto
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 15:14:44

    The personification of the shade was a delight to read in this, Toni. You leave me smiling.

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  5. Beverly Crawford
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 16:18:22

    Lovely personification of shade, just waiting for dawn. Funny thought.

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  6. alisonhankinson
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 17:02:12

    The endless heat…so difficult to escape.

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  7. Waltermarks
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 17:21:00

    I hide in the shadows till evening shadows beckon me as well. Don’t need more farmer’s tan 😎

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  8. jaybluepoems
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 19:26:53

    Aaahhh… the responsibility of the summer shade… lovely write.

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  9. Charley
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 19:34:22

    A rough job being the lawn shade. Personification of an unexpected sort.

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  10. Frank Hubeny
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 21:33:13

    Busy shade tossing and turning in the heat rests at the end of day and starts at dawn. Nice description of shade.

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  11. lily
    Aug 08, 2017 @ 23:44:08

    I love the image of shade tossing and turning. 🙂

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  12. kim881
    Aug 09, 2017 @ 02:23:01

    I love the movement of the shade, Toni, on its journey across the lawn and the day.

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  13. Adriana Citlali Ramírez
    Aug 09, 2017 @ 07:11:25

    Oh! I love this! It is such an evocative poem, giving life to the shade.

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  14. mother wintermoon
    Aug 10, 2017 @ 00:32:08

    Bringing shade to life! Fabulous! Love the imagery.

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  15. emangarduque
    Aug 10, 2017 @ 00:47:54

    sunrise to sunset. lovely day! 🙂

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  16. sreeja Harikrishnan
    Aug 10, 2017 @ 05:26:21

    beautiful…..very interesting way to see those shades…!!

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  17. whippetwisdom
    Aug 10, 2017 @ 16:56:22

    I love how the shade lies resting on the lawn like a free spirit who makes her own decisions ☺💜 xxx

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