Real Toads – Natsu no Yoake

For Real Toads Tuesday Platform.

summer dawn begins
fire glows, dark hills sleep – silence
then awakening

Image Japan Board of Tourism

16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa)
    Sep 12, 2017 @ 14:29:26

    Gorgeously penned, Toni!❤️


  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Sep 12, 2017 @ 15:39:38

    I love how you almost make the dawn a dream by the last line


  3. Sherry Marr
    Sep 12, 2017 @ 16:22:04

    This is dreamy to read…..then comes the wish for awakening…..for humankind.


  4. whimsygizmo
    Sep 12, 2017 @ 17:13:35



  5. coalblack
    Sep 12, 2017 @ 18:00:40

    Just came to see where the bumpety bump was coming from! 😉 So glad you stopped by this morning at Word Garden. When do you host at Dverse? When does De?

    –coal (Fireblossom)


    • kanzensakura
      Sep 12, 2017 @ 18:51:18

      I usually host the haibun Mondays and De usually hosts the Quadrille Mondays. I am not hosting this Monday though, Bjorn is doing that. I am not nearly as talented as De is but on her behalf, I thank you! Come on by. We are a friendly group. We don’t bite but have beem known to do liitle nibbles…like on twizzlers. 🙂

      Sent from my Samsung Galaxy Tab®|PROusually host the haibun Mondays


  6. mhatter99
    Sep 12, 2017 @ 20:08:01

    I know this moment


  7. Margaret Elizabeth Bednar
    Sep 12, 2017 @ 21:35:09

    I love the sounds and sights of early morning in the mountains…


  8. thotpurge
    Sep 12, 2017 @ 22:32:14

    The moment before full light… yes!


  9. oldegg
    Sep 12, 2017 @ 23:55:39

    Dawn is always so comforting to witness. The Japan Tourist Board photo is really stunning and so apt for your haiku.


  10. Magaly Guerrero
    Sep 13, 2017 @ 12:24:30

    In that glorious silence, before the awakening, is where dreams are made… Love this.


  11. ManicDdaily
    Sep 15, 2017 @ 21:30:13

    Ah lovely– makes me nostalgic for the season just passed! k.


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