Today the theme for Haibun Monday is owls. Victoria is hosting the Pub with this lovely winter kigo for haiku. A haibun is brief true prose ending with a haiku – haiku must have a seasonal word to be a haiku. Come visit us to read these haibun about owls. the Japanese word for snowy owl is fukaroo. This is also being posted at Real Toads Tuesday Platform.
Owls at night
I sit on the steps of our back porch. The night is cold and still and a light snow is falling. I pull the quilt tighter around me and gaze out at the snow slowly covering the lawn. From the woods I hear a sound that is like a woman screaming – a tiny screech owl. For something so small it can emit a scream from that sounds like it comes from the pits of despair. The owl screams again. I look up at the dark sky, the stars blacked out by clouds. As I look up, a deeper black slowly glides across the sky – an owl. Probably the screech owl or the saw whet owl I found earlier in autumn living in the woods. There are several owls around here – you can spot them at night or their nesting places during the day if you are observant and very quiet. There is even a ghostly barn owl taking advantage of an old deserted barn. Owls. I love owls. I can sit all night and watch them hunt – hearing their clucking or wild cries as they find and capture prey. The screech owl screams again. The snow continues to fall.
in the cold night owls
split the darkness with their
ghostly glide – snow falls

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Nov 13, 2017 @ 14:30:09
I turn to you for haibun beauty and this doesn’t disappoint. The scene is so serene, even peaceful and mysterious and then the owl splits the darkness in a silent ghostly glide. Wow. Let’s go and get some hot tea then come back and watch some more.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 14:31:08
Oh my yes! Let’s do. or maybe hot cocoa with a touch of cinnamon?
Nov 13, 2017 @ 14:40:43
That is so beautiful, with the sounds of the different owls and the sense snow brings and silent flight.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 15:10:54
Thank you.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 15:08:10
Nice.
I am rather fond of owls, though we see them so rarely. Perhaps because they are night hunters and rely on that stealth. I have seen a few in the day time nesting.
Been doing quite a bit of back porch sitting myself. The bite of the first wave of winter in the chest makes you feel alive. Though a blanket is def nice too. Ha. No snow her yet though. Just cold. And a bit of frost.
Perhaps the snow would make them show up a bit more in teh sky (as your haiku suggests) or at least as a shadow gliding.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 15:10:31
This is actually an accounting from last year. We haven’t had snow yet either although it is so cold now. I still add a quilt to my back porch sittings. I love owls and have counted four in this area. One day timer and the rest nocturnal.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 15:14:59
I sit out so long in the darkness, my eyes adjust to the differences in the blackness. I am an insomniac. Nothing keeps me from sitting and watching or wandering about.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 17:43:35
“Nothing keeps me from sitting and watching or wandering about.”
This makes me like you even more. 🙂
Nov 13, 2017 @ 19:30:57
Bless your sweet heart. 🐈
Nov 13, 2017 @ 15:21:23
Where I live there are few owls.. but I do remember hearing them all the time when I was closer to real woods. Here it would mostly be tawny owls… I used to be afraid of darkness but that was a long time ago, maybe I should sit outside a bit (but it’s so cold)
Nov 13, 2017 @ 15:24:10
Grab a quilt and wrap up!
Nov 13, 2017 @ 15:22:57
I am with you….enveloped in your quilt watching and listening too. Your imagery just makes me be there with you! And yes…they do have a ghostly glide and their wing span is quite amazing in comparison to their body’s girth.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 15:35:07
This is so beautiful. I am there with you, a bit cold, waiting for the owls to swoop by.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 16:13:26
This is prompt is certainly inspiring some beautiful descriptions and poetic insights. Yours is truly elegant and gliding effortlessly as an owl.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 16:14:21
This is a gorgeous and the haiku is a gem, Toni!
Nov 13, 2017 @ 16:20:53
Snow and cold and owls and sitting on the back porch at night. It sounds a wonderful way to be. XX
Nov 13, 2017 @ 16:51:22
We share the same feelings about owls. The haiku is gorgeous.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 20:13:09
Yes we do!
Nov 14, 2017 @ 05:26:54
🙂
Nov 13, 2017 @ 17:22:31
What a beautiful scene…. surrounded by nature. One week you’re kicking snakes in the leaves and now being serenaded by owls! Lovely haiku. (Btw…in what part of the world are you?…with nature on your doorstep)
Nov 13, 2017 @ 17:57:48
Thank you Vivian. I love in a semi rural part of Chesterfield VA. About a mile West of here, it is totally rural.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 18:17:34
I envy you!
Nov 13, 2017 @ 19:26:09
We are blessed. Over across the way is a man who raises cattle. When you drive past his fields, you can see cute little burros being raised among the cattle. So cute!
Nov 14, 2017 @ 02:48:54
I can picture it😊
Nov 13, 2017 @ 17:23:14
It looks like you have plenty of experience with them. I don’t remember ever seeing an owl perhaps because I didn’t think of looking when I had the opportunity.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 17:44:43
I love this:
“in the cold night owls
split the darkness with their
ghostly glide”
Nov 13, 2017 @ 20:12:47
Thank you Shawna!
Nov 13, 2017 @ 17:57:02
How lucky that you get to see a bunch of them Toni and see them in action ~ Sadly I have not seen one but I can appreciate the sounds of screams and clucking ~ The haiku of the snow falling is serenely lovely ~
Nov 13, 2017 @ 19:29:24
Thank you Grace!
Nov 13, 2017 @ 21:10:11
So beautiful. You are lucky with so many owls around.
Nov 13, 2017 @ 23:36:41
Ah, how i crave for winter. 🙂
Nov 14, 2017 @ 16:54:48
We basically skipped autumn here – straight from summer to winter!
Nov 14, 2017 @ 02:54:48
This is an absolute beauty. It’s a description of a magical night with silence, darkness and owls in action.
Nov 14, 2017 @ 16:54:02
Thank you Sumana!
Nov 14, 2017 @ 16:43:22
A splendid haibun. Lovely.
Nov 14, 2017 @ 19:25:41
We have a few owls in my neighborhood too. Their sounds are beautifully haunting.
Nov 14, 2017 @ 19:40:49
Yes they are although some can be kind of frightening!
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Nov 14, 2017 @ 21:03:16
The shriek is still ringing…
Nov 14, 2017 @ 21:27:50
What a beautiful picture you have painted of the night! I imagined the entire scene with your words: huddled up and listening to different owls as snow falls
Nov 14, 2017 @ 23:27:21
A fabulous haibun…I enjoyed the owl excursion right alongside you; in sight and sound and the silence of the snow!
Nov 15, 2017 @ 08:11:57
I love that last line “ghostly glide – snow falls”. You are so lucky to have so many kinds of owls around you. I enjoyed your haibun and haiku.
Nov 15, 2017 @ 08:26:14
This is soo beautiful, Toni!❤️ Especially love; “I can sit all night and watch them hunt – hearing their clucking or wild cries as they find and capture prey. The screech owl screams again. The snow continues to fall.” ❤️
Nov 15, 2017 @ 11:25:18
like the soprano who can crack glass with top C, your winter owl breaks the ice in a heavenly haiku
Nov 15, 2017 @ 13:51:20
Thank you!
Nov 15, 2017 @ 16:30:53
Sounds like you have a lot of opportunities to see owls. How interesting. You sound like me slipping out on the porch to admire a new blanket of snow I’m moonlight. A magical read☺☺☺
Nov 15, 2017 @ 16:34:51
Thank you so much. I am an insomniac from way back.
Nov 16, 2017 @ 18:19:57
I love the way the owl screeches between your thoughts and sharing of information…. This is beautiful.