This is linked to Real Toads, Tuesday Platform. With total admiration in De Jackson’s (WhimsyGizmo) style of poetry.
Ageless
This poem is ageless –
No wrinkles, no white hair, no unsteady gait.
This poem dances on the shores
of oceans, lakes, deserts.
This poem sings on her backporch
in the moonlight – loudly – Handel’s Halleluiah Chorus .
This poem loves deeply and joyfully
and exchanges the feeling of skin on skin.
This poem is ageless.
This poem flies with owls between the trees –
silent and unafraid.
Dec 26, 2017 @ 22:18:01
Oh, so lovely, especially those closing lines.
Dec 27, 2017 @ 01:48:47
This is (undeniably) my favorite piece by you. I love the theme, what it says about the speaker, the promise (and choices) it shares with anyone willing to welcome them.
This poem is a free soul, delighting
in the gift that is to be.
Dec 27, 2017 @ 02:03:01
I love this poem – especially its flying with owls.
Dec 27, 2017 @ 02:27:40
I love this ageless poem, Toni, dancing on shores and singing on the back porch, and especially flying with owls!
Dec 27, 2017 @ 05:14:08
What a beautiful ageless poem indeed. I love all the images, the dancing and most of all the singing on the backporch
Dec 27, 2017 @ 05:33:46
This poem is why we keep reading poems.
Dec 27, 2017 @ 08:12:47
Wonderful write, Toni! I love the affirmation of life present in every image!
Dec 27, 2017 @ 08:14:07
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #7: Toni’s latest #haibun for Real Toad’s Tuesday Platform!
Dec 27, 2017 @ 12:24:31
Thank you for reblogging!
Dec 27, 2017 @ 12:24:57
My pleasure! 😇
Dec 27, 2017 @ 10:27:12
This poem brings a huge smile on my face and warms my heart!❤️ Beautifully penned, Toni! 😀
Dec 27, 2017 @ 14:42:10
Such a delight, Toni. Automatic antidepressant.
Dec 27, 2017 @ 15:16:36
This poem is ageless.
This poem flies with owls between the trees –
silent and unafraid.
What we have devoted for all these times together and enjoying all the fun! Happy New Year Toni!
Hank
Dec 27, 2017 @ 15:17:52
This poem is beautiful Toni, a pure pleasure to read.
Anna :o]
Dec 27, 2017 @ 17:01:28
What a wonderful poem… I love the ageless and the skin to skin.
Dec 28, 2017 @ 14:29:31
Thank you Bjorn!
Dec 28, 2017 @ 06:56:27
I love this–full of joy of and in life, and this poem does do all those things.
Dec 28, 2017 @ 14:28:18
Thank you!