Haikai Challenge #18 Crow

#Haikai Challenge #18 (1/27/18): Raven #haiku #senryu #haibun #tanka #renga #haiga
I.
across the snowy field
the sound of a lone crow floats –
coldness overwhelms

II.
silent neighborhood –
distant crows break the silence –
cold and still today

10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Victoria C. Slotto
    Jan 27, 2018 @ 18:15:49

    If I step outside right now I’m almost sure I could hear a crow break the silence. They are so powerful and they caws do communicate.

    Reply

  2. Frank J. Tassone
    Jan 27, 2018 @ 18:28:55

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #9: Toni’s latest two haiku for my current #Haikai challenge!

    Reply

  3. Jane Dougherty
    Jan 28, 2018 @ 06:00:09

    I like your contrast of black and white, hoarse cry and silence.

    Reply

  4. Jules
    Jan 28, 2018 @ 07:47:35

    Last eve at dusk driving, as hundreds of crows settled… Like Hitchcock’s the birds…
    though noiselessly ominous they were.

    Reply

  5. Jules
    Jan 28, 2018 @ 07:49:31

    I’ve two this week:
    free*flight*fought*found
    ego, id, superego; raven
    The later is three separate verse – visit either or both 🙂

    Reply

  6. merrildsmith
    Jan 28, 2018 @ 13:30:24

    I like the spareness of these–like a cold winter morning.

    Reply

  7. Trackback: #Haikai Challenge #19 (2/3/18): Skylark #haiku #senryu #haibun #tanka #renga #haiga – Frank J. Tassone
  8. Francina
    Feb 03, 2018 @ 16:33:55

    Beautiful.

    Reply

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