#Haikai Challenge #18 (1/27/18): Raven #haiku #senryu #haibun #tanka #renga #haiga
I.
across the snowy field
the sound of a lone crow floats –
coldness overwhelms
II.
silent neighborhood –
distant crows break the silence –
cold and still today
kanzen sakura 
Jan 27, 2018 @ 18:15:49
If I step outside right now I’m almost sure I could hear a crow break the silence. They are so powerful and they caws do communicate.
Jan 27, 2018 @ 18:28:55
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #9: Toni’s latest two haiku for my current #Haikai challenge!
Jan 28, 2018 @ 06:00:09
I like your contrast of black and white, hoarse cry and silence.
Jan 28, 2018 @ 07:47:35
Last eve at dusk driving, as hundreds of crows settled… Like Hitchcock’s the birds…
though noiselessly ominous they were.
Jan 28, 2018 @ 07:49:31
I’ve two this week:
free*flight*fought*found
ego, id, superego; raven
The later is three separate verse – visit either or both 🙂
Jan 28, 2018 @ 13:30:24
I like the spareness of these–like a cold winter morning.
Jan 28, 2018 @ 18:32:11
Thank you!
Feb 03, 2018 @ 16:33:55
Beautiful.
Feb 03, 2018 @ 16:35:35
Thank you.
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