Haiku: Flowering quince

copyright kanzensakura

 

tiny red buds
sleeping in the cold –
sign of spring

sign of spring
blooming in spite of snow
flowering quince

 

copyright kanzensakura

 

18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vivian Zems
    Feb 08, 2018 @ 12:13:24

    The imagery is beautifully transformed as I walk forwards, then backwards through your words. Good one!

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  2. Victoria C. Slotto
    Feb 08, 2018 @ 13:22:24

    Hopeful, metaphoric.

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  3. Frank J. Tassone
    Feb 08, 2018 @ 16:14:52

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #13: Toni’s latest haiku!

    Reply

  4. sarahsouthwest
    Feb 08, 2018 @ 17:19:17

    My favourite! Thank you.

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  5. sarahsouthwest
    Feb 09, 2018 @ 01:52:23

    Sorry, I was dashing. I love flowering quince – that dull red is so beautiful. I like the way this pair of haiku bounce off each other, but most of all I like being reminded to go outside and look at one of my favourite flowers.

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  6. Rosemary Nissen-Wade
    Feb 11, 2018 @ 19:28:12

    Beautiful! They enhance each other.

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  7. Myrna Rosa
    Feb 11, 2018 @ 21:32:56

    How sweet these are. Hope the snow melts soon.

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  8. Larkin
    Feb 11, 2018 @ 22:08:19

    So beautiful.

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  9. Mary
    Feb 11, 2018 @ 22:12:27

    How wonderful to see a sign of spring despite the snow! (I can hardly wait.) Any sign of spring is a good thing.

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  10. Sherry Marr
    Feb 11, 2018 @ 22:17:06

    So beautiful. In Tofino, daffs and tulips are sprouting up….spring is on its wayl

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  11. oldegg
    Feb 12, 2018 @ 06:27:39

    That’s determination by the quince lets hope she is is fruitful.

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  12. Donna@LivingFromHappiness
    Feb 12, 2018 @ 06:51:57

    I really liked how you flipped the haiku and worked backwards from the last line to the first….what a beautiful sign of spring.

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  13. Sanaa Rizvi
    Feb 12, 2018 @ 07:27:43

    I love the hope in your words… truly inspiring!💞

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  14. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Feb 12, 2018 @ 14:20:33

    Love this… no quince here… not a bloom in sight yet.. but daylight is coming back..

    Reply

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