Haikai Challenge #24 #2 tanka

For Frank’s Haikai Challenge #24

December night sky –
snow like frozen stars silent
as dust falls to earth –
no wishes on these lost stars –
summer photo fades with time

5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Frank J. Tassone
    Mar 10, 2018 @ 19:08:24

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #15: Toni’s latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!

    Reply

  2. Victoria C. Slotto
    Mar 10, 2018 @ 19:57:56

    This made me think of those occasional Christmas eves when nature sets the stage for the celebration. That didn’t happen this year, though. Peaceful.

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  3. Jane Dougherty
    Mar 11, 2018 @ 14:10:44

    There’s a wistfulness in this one, of lost stars and wishes, winter and summer.

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  4. Jules
    Mar 12, 2018 @ 15:27:09

    Do lost stars allow for clarified dreams?
    Looking forward to spotting the few constellations I do know.

    Reply

  5. Trackback: #Haikai Challenge #25 (3/17/18): (Spring) Equinox (higan) #haiku #senryu #haibun #tanka #haiga #renga – Frank J. Tassone

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