Minamikaze

Day Six of Nano-nano. or whatever it is. At Real Toads, doing the prompt thing with them.  Today the prompt is “speaking with another’s voice”.

Minamikaze
We became one the first time you held me.
I reflected your face in my surface –
We became one the first time I felt your tears.
We became one the first time I tasted your blood.
I remember that first day you pulled me from my sheath.
You wept at my beauty and then you pulled me
Against your hand and I felt your pain and tasted your blood.
I felt your wonder as you swung me through
The air and your heart beating through my handle.
I felt your love for me as you named me:
Minamikaze – South Wind
I am the gentle wind from the south,
The white dragon – the one who flies above the clouds.
I am yours as you are mine.

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vivian Zems
    Apr 06, 2018 @ 14:44:08

    I love the name of the sword and the way your words weld both it and the holder through blood and tears. Beautiful.

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  2. alisonhankinson
    Apr 06, 2018 @ 15:07:00

    We became one the first time you held me.
    I reflected your face in my surface –
    I think it is a fitting name, it suggests freedom not death.

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  3. ladynyo
    Apr 06, 2018 @ 16:26:11

    Wow…this is beautiful and dynamite. enthralling.

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  4. Sherry Marr
    Apr 06, 2018 @ 16:28:23

    WOW! This is simply stellar. So vivid. I love the referance to the South Wind and white dragon. So wonderful, Toni!

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  5. Rosemary Nissen-Wade
    Apr 07, 2018 @ 03:07:22

    Redolent of an ancient system of formal ritual, whilst at the same time so emotional and personal. Great name for a sword!

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  6. sanaarizvi
    Apr 07, 2018 @ 04:10:31

    Oh this is beautiful!💜 I can truly feel your love radiating from your words!

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  7. paul scribbles
    Apr 07, 2018 @ 04:27:11

    A love story right there.

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  8. Kerry
    Apr 07, 2018 @ 05:33:48

    I was looking forward to your take on the prompt.. really wonderful perspective on the bond between warrior and weapon. It transcends the potential violence of the combination.

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  9. annell4
    Apr 09, 2018 @ 09:35:38

    A beautiful love story!!

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  10. purplepeninportland
    Apr 09, 2018 @ 20:31:56

    I love your point of view voice for this, Toni! It soars.

    Reply

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