Beach

A micropoem for Today’s prompt at Real Toads, day 19 of the Nanasomething. Sanaa has given us several word lists from which to choose to make a poem. I chose the list with blue, mouth, sensual, features.  I chose a micropoem ’cause I didn’t want to scare Shay with a haiku!

Beach
the dominant blue sea
opens its mouth and sensually
licks the features of
a submissive beach

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. sanaarizvi
    Apr 19, 2018 @ 12:18:49

    This is pure perfection!❤️

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  2. elleceef
    Apr 19, 2018 @ 13:41:48

    I love your micro poem, it’s beautiful 🙂

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  3. Sherry Marr
    Apr 19, 2018 @ 15:45:02

    A cool interpretation of the beach. I may never look at it the same way again, lol.

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  4. Margaret Elizabeth Bednar
    Apr 19, 2018 @ 15:54:04

    Amazing!

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  5. Robert Bourne
    Apr 19, 2018 @ 16:39:52

    in a few choice words you caught a beautiful image…

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  6. Vivian Zems
    Apr 19, 2018 @ 20:48:35

    Yes! It always does that… the rude sea!😂

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  7. Jim
    Apr 19, 2018 @ 22:02:30

    This is drooling sensuality, Toni. I enjoyed reading it , and for sure it’s not a Haiku.
    ..

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Apr 20, 2018 @ 04:23:04

    I love the choice of submissive beach… just what the waves might need after their long travel

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  9. annell4
    Apr 20, 2018 @ 09:27:39

    How wonderful!!!

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  10. Magaly Guerrero
    Apr 20, 2018 @ 15:41:18

    I’m pretty sure I just heard that beach moan. Or, it was probably me.

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  11. Rosemary Nissen-Wade
    Apr 21, 2018 @ 18:46:39

    Wow, love what you have done with the words!

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  12. purplepeninportland
    May 03, 2018 @ 20:47:04

    Love that “submissive beach”, Toni. This is using words to their best advantage.

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