For Open Link Night at dVerse. happy holidays to you all and happy new year!Wolf Moon
“As I always like to say, good is good forever.” Anthony Bourdain
the wolf moon begins to rise
shattered into pieces
by black branches
like a sky mounted mirror.
branches begin to whisper
tossed by high flying breezes
sounding like windchimes made from seashells,
small animal bones, broken glass –
The wolf moon crouches in the sky
sniffing the smell of the wind.
Dec 13, 2018 @ 18:39:34
I enjoyed the visceral feel of this piece – rich writing…
Dec 13, 2018 @ 19:26:29
I enjoyed this Toni. I especially loved the couplet that ended this poem, animating the moon to a crouching sniffing beast. Well written… 🙂
I wrote a long-form poem in 2010 featuring a wolf moon.
It is here if you are curious>. http://www.image-verse.com/lupus-luna
Dec 13, 2018 @ 21:04:59
Love the mystery of that rising wolf moon. There is much anticipation, like a hunt:
The wolf moon crouches in the sky
sniffing the smell of the wind.
Thank you Toni for your support. Cheers for the new year!!!
Dec 13, 2018 @ 21:16:42
Effective imagery – enjoyed this one.
Dec 13, 2018 @ 21:22:06
Your images bring the moon to life! Sniffing the wind!
The photo makes it look like a Crystal Ball set in the trees!
Dec 13, 2018 @ 21:24:59
I thought that too!
Dec 13, 2018 @ 23:32:46
This is stunning. One of my favorite poems ever.
I love this image:
“shattered into pieces
by black branches”
Dec 14, 2018 @ 03:27:04
I love the image of the moon crouching and sniffing… the moon is a wolf.
Dec 14, 2018 @ 03:45:28
I love the idea of the moon sniffing the smell of the wind, such a wonderful image you paint here Toni. Wishing you a magical Christmas and a very happy New Year 🤗💖🐕🎄 xxx
Dec 14, 2018 @ 11:05:40
Nicely done, Toni.
Dec 14, 2018 @ 11:16:50
Beautiful. I love the wildness of this!
Dec 14, 2018 @ 12:41:48
Lovely winter poem makes me want to be outside sniffing with the wolf
Dec 14, 2018 @ 16:03:59
I love your wolf moon, Toni! I like the windshield sounds of branches compared to seashells, bones and glass, and the image of a wolf crouching in the sky.
Dec 14, 2018 @ 18:08:57
“shattered into pieces by black branches” sigh this is so poignant! 💞
Dec 14, 2018 @ 19:42:03
I like that wolf moon sniffing the wind.
Dec 14, 2018 @ 23:19:34
branches shattering a mirror moon, such an ethereal feel, like the moon was so vulnerable that night
Dec 14, 2018 @ 23:35:16
” moon begins to rise
shattered into pieces
by black branches”…
such a cool description, and now that it is written so obvious. Wish I’d written this.
Dec 16, 2018 @ 15:45:29
Beautifully written. We feel the very tug of the moon in these words. Think will to go somewhere and howl. 🙂
Dec 16, 2018 @ 15:50:25
Arrooooooooo!
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Dec 16, 2018 @ 17:16:06
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Dec 21, 2018 @ 07:19:02
I almost missed this.We had a night like this last night; ZP was perturbed at all the noises. You have a talent for depicting nature, and i especially love the …not personification, but animalization? of the moon at the end. Sometimes it does feel like that.
Dec 21, 2018 @ 07:54:42
And I almost missed your prompt about the Tasie Tiger….i will be writing to this as soon as I can get my act together fren!
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