Hectic Snow

For Sunday Muse #38

Hectic Snow
The wrong time –
The wrong tune –
Stars swirl around like hectic snow.
Their songs lure you
And you float up and follow.
The music follows you
Until they freeze and fall
Like hectic snow.

Sunday Muse #38



7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Carrie V. H.
    Jan 15, 2019 @ 12:47:36

    Love the way you have captured the photo Toni! A dance of words and thought. I love it! Thank you so much for joining us this week!


  2. Vicki
    Jan 15, 2019 @ 17:55:13

    Love the thought of stars luring you through song.


  3. purplepeninportland
    Jan 16, 2019 @ 16:06:50

    Love the thought of hectic snow. Lovely poem, Toni.


  4. Edwin Rigg
    Jan 16, 2019 @ 18:56:29

    Interesting inclusion of the astronomical . . . makes it even more appealing and love your words


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