Backyard Disco

For the Midweek Motif at Poets Unite – Dance.  I was really into Disco in the 1970’s.  Gay Pride and free dancing were all born in the discos.

Backyard Disco
“Up above my head I hear music in the air that makes me know there’s a party somewhere” – The Trammps, Disco Inferno

Bees go back and forth in
weaving do-si-dos,
butterflies soar and dip,
hummingbirds hover and then zip!
it is a disco inferno in my back yard –
how the creatures dance
and make me dance too

13 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. magicalmysticalteacher
    Jul 24, 2019 @ 16:39:36

    How few people pay attention to the dancing of the little creatures in this world! Thank goodness for poets who notice the zipping of the hummingbirds and the dipping of the butterflies!


  2. Helen
    Jul 24, 2019 @ 17:55:00

    Hand me down my dancing shoes! I want to join in the dance!!


  3. Marja
    Jul 24, 2019 @ 19:39:26

    What a magic poem with the bees and butterflies dancing and who wouldn’t hearing disco inferno I have danced a lot on that one


  4. oldegg
    Jul 24, 2019 @ 20:59:48

    Years ago when i had a big garden it was always a delight to witness the constant activity of all the insects, birds and animals that came to visit to be part of my world. Your poem certainly took me back to when even I was dancing aound the garden!


  5. Sumana Roy
    Jul 25, 2019 @ 00:26:02

    I Love ‘disco inferno’. Simply grand!


  6. susanstoo
    Jul 25, 2019 @ 10:05:30

    Oh, yes, disco! I was there, and now, along with the music you offer–I am seeing my back yard with a huge smile on my face.


  7. Shawna
    Jul 25, 2019 @ 13:27:18

    This is so awesome.


  8. kim881
    Jul 26, 2019 @ 03:05:56

    A wonderful dance of nature, Toni! The lightning last night was like a strobe, I can imagine night insects bopping to that!


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