Families Only

An American Sentence for Carrie’s Sunday Muse BlogSpot. An American Sentence is exactly 17 syllables and is a complete sentence. It is different from a haiku in that there are no season references and is written in sentence form.

Families Only
“Who will feed the orphans when all the parents have gone?” ― Anthony T. Hincks Families

Families only are allowed; I am an orphan and cannot go.

 

10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Frank J. Tassone
    Sep 30, 2019 @ 14:27:44

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #5: Toni Spencer’s latest #AmericanSentence for Carrie’s Sunday Muse Blogspot!

    Reply

  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Sep 30, 2019 @ 15:52:40

    I love the sadness you saw in the image.

    Reply

  3. Susie Clevenger
    Sep 30, 2019 @ 15:53:04

    Oh, this breaks my heart.

    Reply

  4. Carrie V. H.
    Sep 30, 2019 @ 17:27:05

    You captured the sad feel beautifully Toni. A wonderful and poignant American Sentence that brings one to tears.

    Reply

  5. Magaly Guerrero
    Sep 30, 2019 @ 20:58:29

    Goodness, this is so sad. All the brightness in the image makes the speaker’s pain more palpable.

    Reply

  6. Truedessa
    Oct 02, 2019 @ 19:19:47

    (sigh) heart-breaking

    Reply

  7. Misky
    Oct 07, 2019 @ 06:38:49

    You’ve left me speechless.

    Reply

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