Sailing

For Kerry’s Prompt at Real Toads, Art Flash, an American Sentence.  An American Sentence is exactly 17 syllables and is a complete sentence. It is not necessary to rhyme it as it is Allen Ginsberg’s version of a haiku.

Sailing
“Hark, now hear the sailors cry, Smell the sea, and feel the sky, Let your soul and spirit fly, into the mystic.” –  – Into the Mystic   Van Morrison

The moon sails on an ebony ink lake like an argent Lucifer.

21 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. jaerose37
    Oct 04, 2019 @ 09:19:06

    What a cleverly written piece – captures the mood superbly

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  2. Helen L Dehner
    Oct 04, 2019 @ 12:13:46

    Love the use of argent ~~~ perfect! The moon, the kitty.

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  3. kim881
    Oct 04, 2019 @ 14:07:00

    I love the quote from Van the Man, Toni, and the gorgeous used of monochrome – ebony ink and argent – in your American sentence!

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  4. coalblack
    Oct 04, 2019 @ 15:25:03

    Yeah, I’m digging “argent” too.

    That’s totally an owl, not a cat. btw.

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    • kanzensakura
      Oct 04, 2019 @ 15:27:07

      Yeppers. I know it is an owl. LOL. I loved my play on words too. Lucifer used to be the name matches were called in the Victorian days. So we have a silver “lucifer” or a silver Devil. LOL.

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  5. sanaarizvi
    Oct 04, 2019 @ 16:41:21

    This is wonderful! I love; “The moon sails on an ebony ink lake.” 🙂

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  6. oldegg
    Oct 04, 2019 @ 20:07:51

    Argent (silver) is a beauiful word, well done for using it.

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  7. Kerry
    Oct 05, 2019 @ 03:50:54

    Oooh! Argent Lucifer! I love it.

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  8. Linda Lee Lyberg
    Oct 05, 2019 @ 11:56:54

    Perfect Toni!

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  9. purplepeninportland
    Oct 05, 2019 @ 19:09:08

    You really captured this, Toni!

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  10. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Oct 06, 2019 @ 11:06:58

    The normal silver of the being replaced by argent is perfect in combination with Lucifer… fallen from the sky.

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  11. Lori
    Oct 06, 2019 @ 11:10:13

    I like the comparison of the dark night sky to an ebony lake. There is something dark and luscious but also devious in the argent lucifer.

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  12. Rob Kistner
    Oct 06, 2019 @ 19:36:15

    Really great song by Van the Man — and much revealed in your AS Toni!

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  13. Vivian Zems
    Oct 10, 2019 @ 09:57:53

    Love this ekphrastic sentence. Those horns do remind me of the evil one😈

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