Hunters Moon

An American Sentence for Amaya’s Prompt at dVerse – Majesty   An American sentence is Ginsberg’s answer to the haiku because he had a problem following the rules for haiku.  It is exactly 17 syllables and a complete sentence.

 

Hunters Moon
“Moonlight is sculpture…” ― Nathaniel Hawthorne

Can anything have more majesty than the moon over the ocean?

Hunters Moon over the ocean

25 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Frank J. Tassone
    Oct 15, 2019 @ 17:32:06

    Beautiful, Toni! Did you know that my #haikai challenge this week is all about the Hunter’s Moon? I would happily welcome you American Sentence, if you would like to share it.

    https://frankjtassone.com/2019/10/12/haikai-challenge-108-10-12-19-hunters-moon-next-full-moon-nochi-no-tsuki-haiku-senryu-haibun-tanka-haiga-renga/

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  2. Frank J. Tassone
    Oct 15, 2019 @ 17:33:06

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #5: Toni Spencer’s latest #AmericanSentence for #dVersePoets #TuesdayPoetics!

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  3. Just Barry
    Oct 15, 2019 @ 17:48:14

    Breathtaking.

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  4. ecopoet
    Oct 15, 2019 @ 17:52:24

    Wonderful

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  5. merrildsmith
    Oct 15, 2019 @ 18:10:08

    Perfect, Toni!

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  6. Glenn Buttkus
    Oct 15, 2019 @ 18:10:12

    You really got me with a jones for writing American sentences. Blood Moon is my favorite.

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  7. Frank Hubeny
    Oct 15, 2019 @ 19:02:42

    The full moon is beautiful over the ocean. I have often waited for one to rise many times disappointed by the weather.

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  8. The Abject Muse
    Oct 15, 2019 @ 19:39:15

    Very nice writing. American poems aren’t as easy as they look. 🙂

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  9. Jennifer Wagner
    Oct 15, 2019 @ 22:25:31

    Well captured, Toni! And shorter poems tend to be my favorites!

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  10. Jane Dougherty
    Oct 16, 2019 @ 03:59:48

    A beautiful truism. We can only admire, never surpass.

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  11. Misky
    Oct 16, 2019 @ 05:54:10

    Love a good American Sentence.

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  12. Gospel Isosceles
    Oct 16, 2019 @ 10:42:56

    No, you win:)
    I’d also like to try one of these!

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    • kanzensakura
      Oct 16, 2019 @ 11:06:44

      Try it! The only rules are thst it is a complete sentence snd exactly 17 syllables. Post one at s time otherwise it aint a sentence.😊

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  13. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Oct 16, 2019 @ 15:05:52

    This is wonderful and I love that you make the sentence a question… I love poetry with questions more than those with answers.

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  14. purplepeninportland
    Oct 18, 2019 @ 13:52:14

    This makes me want to try an American sentence. You can open a whole world in a tiny moment.

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