Leaves II

An American Sentence for Halloween for dVerse Poets Open Link Night – https://dversepoets.com/

Leaves II
“Tears are words the heart can’t express.” Gerard Way

Leaves falling like tears this All Hallows Eve; it ends in tears anyway.

13 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Linda Lee Lyberg
    Oct 31, 2019 @ 15:20:19

    So much sadness in one line. Thanks for sharing Toni.

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  2. kim881
    Oct 31, 2019 @ 15:46:58

    Short and bittersweet, Toni!

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Oct 31, 2019 @ 16:10:00

    All leaves are leaving… but tears just keep falling

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  4. Rob Kistner
    Oct 31, 2019 @ 16:11:11

    You have been on a roll with American Sentences Toni. 🙂

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  5. Glenn A. Buttkus
    Oct 31, 2019 @ 16:49:08

    Ginsberg would be proud of you. I have a huge maple tree next door, and right now the lawn is buried a foot deep in leaves. Oh well, my grandkids love to play in them.

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    • kanzensakura
      Oct 31, 2019 @ 16:50:50

      How neat. I loved playing in piles of leaves when I as a kid. I am out to out do Ginsberg, lol

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  6. sanaarizvi
    Oct 31, 2019 @ 18:30:34

    A bittersweet American Sentence, Toni! ❤️

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  7. Arcadia Maria
    Oct 31, 2019 @ 18:59:55

    Lovely words.

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  8. Frank J. Tassone
    Oct 31, 2019 @ 19:47:52

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #12: Toni Spencer’s latest #AmericanSentence!

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  9. Frank Hubeny
    Oct 31, 2019 @ 20:15:59

    I like how you liked leaves and tears.

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  10. Just Barry
    Nov 02, 2019 @ 20:12:50

    The density packed within the brevity of your line cuts deeply.

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    • kanzensakura
      Nov 02, 2019 @ 20:17:26

      Thank you. I work harder on these American Sentences actually than I do regularly lengthed poems.

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