Shells

An American Sentence for the Prompt today at Real Toads. We have a mystery guest with a list of words. I know who it is!!!! And she makes amazing word lists.

Shells
“The flood subsides, and the body, like a worn sea-shell emerges strange and lovely.” – D. H. Lawrence

Shells like strewn lemon sticks on the shore of an onyx sea speak to me.

 

18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. merrildsmith
    Nov 23, 2019 @ 17:34:50

    Lovely!

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  2. S
    Nov 23, 2019 @ 17:46:18

    This is why this form was invented. Exquisite work.

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    • kanzensakura
      Nov 23, 2019 @ 17:48:29

      LOL. I like your comment but Ginsberg invented the form because somehow, he couldn’t write haiku which he loved. Thank you so much for the wonderful list of words, I did about 5 Sentences before I found one I liked. You need to post more of your poetry girl. You are astounding.

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      • S
        Nov 23, 2019 @ 18:38:32

        I was going to suggest you write a whole batch of these with the list! I’m glad you had fun. 🙂

        Thank you. {Blushing.}

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        • kanzensakura
          Nov 23, 2019 @ 19:10:44

          I wrote several of them. This was the only I felt good about. I actually take more time working out an AS than I do regular poem. Very precise and surgical work.

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  3. RedCat
    Nov 23, 2019 @ 18:05:29

    Wonderful. What a sentence. Will try that form one day, seems fun and challenging.

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  4. georgeplace2013
    Nov 23, 2019 @ 20:47:22

    I’m adding the AS to my to try list. Wonderful sentence (and I love the quote)

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  5. revivedwriter
    Nov 23, 2019 @ 21:12:42

    I am impressed!

    Reply

  6. Kerry
    Nov 24, 2019 @ 01:27:07

    Perfect!

    Reply

  7. Margaret Elizabeth Bednar
    Nov 24, 2019 @ 01:58:44

    Beautiful. I love the winter beach … not many tourists and I have found it layered, like a quilt, with shells undisturbed. Sigh.

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Nov 24, 2019 @ 05:11:56

    Love this…. I do love a beach with an onyx sea.

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  9. sanaarizvi
    Nov 24, 2019 @ 11:36:54

    So utterly gorgeous! ❤️

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  10. fireblossom32
    Nov 24, 2019 @ 11:37:17

    And what do they say???

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  11. Susie Clevenger
    Nov 26, 2019 @ 13:42:24

    Your sentence speaks so many visuals to me. I too long to hear the sea speak to me.

    Reply

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