An American Sentence for the Prompt today at Real Toads. We have a mystery guest with a list of words. I know who it is!!!! And she makes amazing word lists.
Shells
“The flood subsides, and the body, like a worn sea-shell emerges strange and lovely.” – D. H. Lawrence
Shells like strewn lemon sticks on the shore of an onyx sea speak to me.
Nov 23, 2019 @ 17:34:50
Lovely!
Nov 23, 2019 @ 17:46:18
This is why this form was invented. Exquisite work.
Nov 23, 2019 @ 17:48:29
LOL. I like your comment but Ginsberg invented the form because somehow, he couldn’t write haiku which he loved. Thank you so much for the wonderful list of words, I did about 5 Sentences before I found one I liked. You need to post more of your poetry girl. You are astounding.
Nov 23, 2019 @ 18:38:32
I was going to suggest you write a whole batch of these with the list! I’m glad you had fun. 🙂
Thank you. {Blushing.}
Nov 23, 2019 @ 19:10:44
I wrote several of them. This was the only I felt good about. I actually take more time working out an AS than I do regular poem. Very precise and surgical work.
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Nov 23, 2019 @ 18:05:29
Wonderful. What a sentence. Will try that form one day, seems fun and challenging.
Nov 23, 2019 @ 19:14:40
It is. Very precise work. The rules are: exactly 17 syllables and the sentence must be complete.
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Nov 23, 2019 @ 20:47:22
I’m adding the AS to my to try list. Wonderful sentence (and I love the quote)
Nov 23, 2019 @ 21:28:54
Great. Give it a try. I love the form.
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Nov 23, 2019 @ 21:12:42
I am impressed!
Nov 24, 2019 @ 01:27:07
Perfect!
Nov 24, 2019 @ 01:58:44
Beautiful. I love the winter beach … not many tourists and I have found it layered, like a quilt, with shells undisturbed. Sigh.
Nov 24, 2019 @ 05:11:56
Love this…. I do love a beach with an onyx sea.
Nov 24, 2019 @ 11:36:54
So utterly gorgeous! ❤️
Nov 24, 2019 @ 11:37:17
And what do they say???
Nov 24, 2019 @ 13:27:03
Thry say shushhh, shussssh
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Nov 26, 2019 @ 13:42:24
Your sentence speaks so many visuals to me. I too long to hear the sea speak to me.
Nov 26, 2019 @ 15:30:57
It has a deeply mysterious voice, doesn’t it?