For Carrie’s Sunday Muse BlogSpot.
Days Pass
The red of sunrise, the blue of the sky all remind me that you are gone.
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12 Jan 2020 28 Comments
in American Sentence Tags: death, grief, passing days
For Carrie’s Sunday Muse BlogSpot.
Days Pass
The red of sunrise, the blue of the sky all remind me that you are gone.
Jan 12, 2020 @ 13:19:41
❤️
Jan 12, 2020 @ 13:47:12
Your American Sentence is heartfelt, the sorrow and loss are real. May poetry strengthen you during this time.
Peace
Jan 12, 2020 @ 14:09:37
Pouring our grief into poetry, and reading poetry, are wonderful tonics and help us express out emotions without having to speak to anyone. We can cry openly and let tears fall on paper. I love the use of colour in this American sentence, Toni.
Jan 12, 2020 @ 15:04:32
This is so very filled with sorrow… all the colors will be a reminder, but stick to the palette and turn your back to the grey.
Jan 12, 2020 @ 15:11:51
Thank you Bjorn. It will be hard for a very long time. When loses half of your heart, it is difficult.
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Jan 12, 2020 @ 16:25:41
Poignant- and so reflective of your grief. Thoughts and prayers , Toni.
Jan 12, 2020 @ 16:53:14
Grief can be a heavy burden and emptiness all at the same time. This is heart breaking and beautiful writing Toni. You have been on my mind my friend. Sending hugs and prayers your way. 💙
Jan 12, 2020 @ 17:20:59
Bless you Carrie.
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Jan 12, 2020 @ 17:23:58
LOVE
Jan 12, 2020 @ 18:01:18
Few words filled with a huge burden of pain. I can’t begin to imagine, except to feel your words.
Jan 12, 2020 @ 23:49:05
Heart-ripping imagery. I can feel this piece all the way to my bones.
Jan 13, 2020 @ 00:14:06
So heartbreaking. I feel your words, Toni.
Jan 13, 2020 @ 02:59:44
Poignant!
Much❤love
Jan 13, 2020 @ 03:50:28
What a beautiful one-line poem! (One syllable too long for an American Sentence – yet I can’t find one you could drop.)
Jan 13, 2020 @ 04:03:44
Ah. Thank you for catching that syllable for me. Sometimes my fingers don’t work when I am counting.
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Jan 13, 2020 @ 06:30:48
Beautiful – so much in just a line
Jan 13, 2020 @ 08:56:42
A perfect AS, I feel it so keenly.
Jan 13, 2020 @ 10:35:46
Simple and honest.
Jan 13, 2020 @ 11:34:14
A poem from deep within the grieving heart.
Jan 13, 2020 @ 11:37:33
A sentence, a poem, a story …. love it.
Jan 13, 2020 @ 14:22:19
Oh yes. This says it all. Thinking of you, Toni.
Jan 13, 2020 @ 15:50:29
Such heartbreaking honesty
Jan 13, 2020 @ 20:51:30
American sentence form is perfect for this. May you heal.
Jan 14, 2020 @ 12:22:40
When we lose someone, it seems sometimes cruel that everything beautiful is full of them – and yet a wonderful blessing at the same time. Much love to you.
Jan 14, 2020 @ 13:27:15
Sometimes there are too many reminders of what or whom we are missing.
Jan 15, 2020 @ 07:52:59
Beautiful words Toni, your loss is palpable.
Please know my thoughts are with you.
Anna
Jan 15, 2020 @ 12:45:29
My deepest condolences, Toni. This is an evocative write.
Jan 16, 2020 @ 23:26:45
heart-rendering…