These were posted on Real Toads: http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/07/the-tuesday-platform_18.html This is also being posted on dVerse Open Link Night for Thursday. Winter haiku because as Cole Porter says: “It’s Too Darn Hot”.
l.
a hawk glides over
skeletal trees – winter blue
sky shows no mercy
ll.
silent neighborhood –
distant crows break the silence –
cold and still today
lll.
the grass is brittle and
frost covers everything –
at noon no melting
IV.
dead leaves carpet ground
beneath bare trees – end of
fall…winter begins
V.
bitter cold morning –
quick whiff of wood smoke before
nostrils become numb
VI.
spits of icy rain
bitter wind tossing tree tops
spring seems distant dream
VII.
brown hillside – splashes
of green cedars – small creatures
find food and shelter
VIII.
bitter winter night
first light of day first snow falls –
branches bloom white
IX.
midnight – snow flowers
spiral down and quickly die
on my outstretched hand
X.
cold winter dawn –
from across the field floats the
caw of a lone crow
Victoria C. Slotto
Jul 18, 2017 @ 17:47:33
I’m not sure what I believe about reincarnation–like to keep my options open, but reading your haiku, Ms. Basho…..hmmm.
Anonymous
Jul 18, 2017 @ 17:54:42
You are so very kind Victoria San….deep reverent bow is being made to you.
kanzensakura
Jul 18, 2017 @ 18:13:49
You are so kind Victoria San….
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thotpurge
Jul 18, 2017 @ 23:42:05
Especially love those crows breaking the silence…
Brendan
Jul 19, 2017 @ 05:16:49
What a wonderful snow globe of haikus. You stay inside the mind of winter throughout.
Kerry O'Connor
Jul 19, 2017 @ 07:45:43
There is something about the form which always suggests a mood of serenity for me. You capture the change of seasons in the many details.
PS. Please could I ask that when linking up at the Imaginary Garden, you use just one of your three appellations? The lengthy combination creates gaps in the links. Thank you.
kanzensakura
Jul 19, 2017 @ 11:59:36
Thank you. Yes I will be most happy to only use one of my appellations.
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Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa)
Jul 19, 2017 @ 17:38:07
Beautifully evocative…. especially; “midnight: snow flowers spiral down and quickly die on my outstretched hand.”
kanzensakura
Jul 20, 2017 @ 13:37:07
Thank you!
Magaly Guerrero
Jul 19, 2017 @ 20:30:17
You’ve made winter sound delightful. And I do not like the cold. But I would not mind this wintry time.
kanzensakura
Jul 20, 2017 @ 13:36:52
Thank you for reading. Winter is my favorite season!
paul scribbles
Jul 20, 2017 @ 07:08:27
Winter reflections of the highest order. One to return too time and again.
kanzensakura
Jul 20, 2017 @ 13:41:02
Thank you for reading and commenting Paul. I love the winter.
Margaret Elizabeth Bednar
Jul 20, 2017 @ 23:22:32
first and last are my favorite but all evoke a scene that is striking
kanzensakura
Jul 20, 2017 @ 23:26:54
Thank you!