Walt is handling the Poetics for us Today (Tuesday) at dVerse Poets Pub. He is asking us to write about summer and gave us some examples to us use or for us to choose our own (selections by Eliot, Whitman, Sandburg, Rector, Issa) to name a few. I have chosen one by Issa which I have used for inspiration before and probably shall use again and again. Come visit us and dive into summer!
“summer night –
even the stars
are whispering to each other” K. Issa
The Mermaid and the Stars
It is high summer.
I sit on my back steps watching
the stars above me and listening
to the cicadas scratching and clicking
from different points in the yard.
So still it is!
So hot even at this late evening time.
I catch a whiff of the gardenia bush
at the edge of the house –
gentle and sweet and reminding me
of summers long ago.
The moon is high and bright
and surrounded by stars.
A cicada on my right and then
the sound of a cicada across the yard.
Back and forth –
I look up again and the stars
twinkle – I come up for air
like a mermaid gasping for water filled breath.
The stars tell me to be still.
They giggle with each other like little girls
telling secrets.
The mermaid swims to the gardenia
and plucks one for her hair.
She looks at the stars one last time
before she drowns in the scent.
The stars fall silent and go to sleep.

Waterhouse, John William; A Mermaid; Royal Academy of Arts
Jun 21, 2016 @ 14:33:13
I could almost have guessed you would chose that wonderful haiku as inspiration… and I love how you expanded the imagery of sitting there in the starlit scent… wonderful… BTW this one has wonderful meter.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 15:30:21
Thank you! I am working on meter and using it. And gee, I wonder how so many people knew I would choose Issa? smiles
Jun 21, 2016 @ 15:44:33
🙂
Jun 21, 2016 @ 14:49:08
The auditory input of the cicadas which recurs throughout make this so wonderful, Toni. When I hear them (early in the desert) or crickets here in Reno, or the mating call of frogs on the water hazards in the desert, I know summer temperatures are on the horizon.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 15:32:31
Oh yes! those wonderful night sounds of coming summer. What music they make, my children of the night….Dracula knew his stuff on that one. I love the night and soon, it will be time for owls and squeaking bats and that over achieving mockingbird to give voice to the night.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 15:22:21
The aural exuberance of this is striking, Toni. I too expected Issa to tempt your muse. I am glad it had.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 15:43:54
Issa and Basho are constants in my sky.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 15:36:51
I like the smell of a haiku in the morning, it smells like–victory. This is an excellent rocking of the prompt, & a gentle, loving visit with you, the cosmos, & the solstice. Living in the suburbs, I see very few stars, & hear very few insect or fog sonatas. Thank God, the urban birds still sing all around us.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 15:42:44
And thank you for those stars! You should be here when my mockingbird, Peat, goes into over achiever mode and sings…all…night. Sometimes the same refrain over and over. Last week I think he did the first six notes from X Files theme a thousand times. His buddy Repeat was sound asleep. We are starting to get people around us and I hate it. But the stars still shine bright and the land around us helps keep us nice and dark at night.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 16:25:19
So lovely! Funny, when I was coming up with my offering, I thought of the stars giggling with each other! I didn’t use that imagery in the end – but what a coincidence!
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:22:42
That is just amazing. I wish you had! That would have just been so much fun.
Jun 22, 2016 @ 14:56:02
Wouldn’t it just!
Jun 21, 2016 @ 16:52:30
Sigh… this is absolutely stunning work Toni 😀 how I adore the words and images in this poem ❤ Beautifully executed.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:22:06
Thank you dear Sanaa!
Jun 21, 2016 @ 18:21:31
I had hoped you would choose Issa, Toni…and how gorgeously you expanded on it. Like an extended haiku, so much noticing. Just beautiful. And I always, always love all things mermaid!
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:21:21
Mermaids are the bomb. When I grow up, I want to be one.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 19:30:14
mmmmm – the smell of gardenia! This is so tender 🙂
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:20:09
🙂 Gardenias are indeed a beautiful scent.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 20:29:38
You captured the atmosphere so beautifully Toni, loved those evening noises….
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:19:17
I am so glad. They are wondrous noises indeed.
Jun 21, 2016 @ 21:42:19
This is lovely. You took me right there, onto that back step, looking at the stars.
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:18:51
I am so glad it did! Having you and Pup as companions is a lovely thought.
Jun 22, 2016 @ 02:02:36
Ah, Toni, your poem invaded my senses: from ‘the cicadas scratching and clicking’ to the ‘whiff of the gardenia bush’.
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:16:46
I am so glad! Summer can be magical at times.
Jun 22, 2016 @ 03:16:07
Toni, your poem had me sighing for a summer like yours. So beautiful, heady yet peaceful. I love this poem so much.
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:17:18
Oh I am so glad you do. Wish I could put some in a jar and send to you.
Jun 22, 2016 @ 09:11:08
What beautiful imagery! Inspiration for a painting, indeed….
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:12:09
Thank you!
Jun 22, 2016 @ 10:13:36
Made me sigh. You notice such beautiful details, and put them into lovely words. This flows so gracefully.
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:11:49
Thank you so very much. I love the noticing of things…makes me happy. 🙂
Jun 22, 2016 @ 11:14:43
A first summer night’s dream poem! Filled with scent and sound and secrets whispered by the stars. Possibly sleep as well… in a hammock. Wonderfully dreamy poem.
Jun 24, 2016 @ 15:19:49
Thank you!
Jun 22, 2016 @ 15:07:31
Your piece evoked some nostalgia for my tropical summers of long ago. It was a fine and satisfying read. 🙂
Jun 26, 2016 @ 20:15:54
Thank you! 🙂
Jun 22, 2016 @ 15:31:58
I could feel the warmth in this and found it most relaxing and peaceful.
Jun 22, 2016 @ 19:17:16
I am glad
Jun 22, 2016 @ 21:10:15
This is a magical piece. I could visualize bright pages of a children’s storybook especially with the giggling stars and mermaids. Loved it!
Oh..and someday I hope to hear what those cicadas really sound like! 🙂
Jun 23, 2016 @ 15:36:44
Actually, on YouTube, they have several videos of cicadas making their noise. To me, it says summer!
Jun 24, 2016 @ 07:13:31
Just catching up this morning — finally. This is magical! I love the scent of gardenias — such delicate petals and such a wonderful feeling they give. Stars giggling and a mermaid — love it! 🙂
Jun 24, 2016 @ 15:08:06
Glad you do! I am just c atching up myself. Hope your ankle is doing better in your air boot!