一つ星 Hitotsuboshi – a tanka

 

This is for a fairy tale couple:

 

Fragrant night white moon

Lush magnolia, fairy

Gardenia – stars

Earthbound, reflecting heaven

Breathing love, lighting the night.  

      

white magnolia           gardenia

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. David Emeron
    May 31, 2013 @ 12:50:41

    My goodness..

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  3. el34ax7
    Jun 07, 2013 @ 16:30:02

    What a lovely thing to come back to! I love a poem that makes me pause and breathe, and I love this poem.

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  4. kanzensakura
    Jun 07, 2013 @ 17:53:53

    どうもありがとうございました Welcome back. I am so glad this was here to greet you. I wrote it for a lovely couple that harkens me back to fairy tales, knighthood…..it comforts me to know such a love exists and is real.

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  5. David Emeron
    Jun 10, 2013 @ 23:57:28

    I keep coming back to this over and over. My Dear Mrs. Emeron loved it! I believe she commented so, possibly on the reblog/quote of this, so you may not have seen it. Wait one sec…. yes, here:

    http://davidemeron.com/?p=7414&preview=true/#comment-1805

    That should get you there!

    Reply

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